Now I realize they've hired the first writer, but I'm trying to write the sequel. My major qualifications are a writer who already writes novels and screenplay about super beings based in some part on Egyptian (Kamitic) Gods and...I WRITE BANGING SCREENPLAYS AND NOVEL.... Witness exhibit A. The long awaited excerpt. Post it share it...Bam. Let's use the hash tag #BlackPantherKamauAtem. I can write a bangin' script for the Black! Thank you in advance for your support! Oh and my apologies in advance the formatting gets a little lossed in mobile.
CUT TO
AVENGERS TOWER, CAMERA HIGH ABOVE PANTHER CLIMBING IN THE RAIN STORM,
emphasizing the thirty stories high above the ground. ANGLE ON FINGERS, as vibranium claws cut a hole in the glass. He snaps off his cape,
drops it and the weight of the vibranium drops straight down until it hits
something. CUT TO the watching Uatu and Thing looking up at the Panther.
UATU
(As he raises his hand majestically and they disappear
slowly)
And that is all we need know.
CUT TO
Avengers tower interior. The Panther walks slowly as the klaxons ring out. The
Wasp meets him.
WASP
(Blasting him with disruptors)
We’re all out of milk Kitty.
PANTHER
(Swatting at her repeatedly and walking with out pause)
I am not here for nourishment.
WASP
All you getting here tall dark and
mysterious. Don’t you know where you are?
(Under her breath, touching her ear)
I’m out. Waiting for recharge
and I didn’t even phase him. This better happen fast or the intruder defense
will be a rescueeeeee.
PANTHER
You slow me unnecessarily.
(Placing her in a vial on his vibranium belt)
And make far too much noise.
WASP
(Into her headset)
He’s got incredible hand speed!
(Her voice goes silent as he places the vial back in the
belt)
And I’m caught just like…..
PANTHER
Hush. Small one.
Suddenly
Ant Man enters the room. Starting full size he runs at the Panther and starts
to fly at him insect size. In a dazzling display of speed, the Panther snatches him out of
the air as well and puts him in a vial on his belt silently.
ANT MAN
Don’t worry we’re only…
PANTHER
The cat rules the jungle. The ant is
walked upon.
The
Panther leaves that room and walks into a hallway. Iron Man appears at the end
of the long hall way.
IRON MAN
What’s up Pussy Cat?
PANTHER
The Iron one…Now this is what I’ve
come for.
IRON MAN
Come for me. Special. But you
shouldn’t have. Especially if you’re not ready and clearly you’re not. I’m not
the bobsy twins…Clearly you’re big and you’ve got lotsa muscle but I’m.. you know
the Iron One…and you…You’re just a pussy in some boots…
PANTHER
Bobsy twins…Ah the
insects…Let’s put these unbreakable canisters down somewhere no harm may come
to them.
(as he tosses them to him)
Your choice.
IRON MAN
(To Jarvis as he catches them tosses them to Cap who
catches them as he alights from an elevator )
Are there any weaknesses? I don’t
know how long I can stall him.
JARVIS
(As cap opens the vials)
Sir
I’ve scanned it and my scans can’t get past his clothing. He appears to me as
he does you A man in a suit. A cat suit.
IRON MAN
Ok. So how much bad can it be right?
If I can’t see it and you can’t detect it?
CAPTAIN AMERICA
(As the Insect lovers grow to full size)
The two of you find Thor. You’ve had
your chance let us have a whack at it.
WASP
(Whining)
Put me back in the game coach…I owe
tall dark and fast…
CAPTAIN AMERICA
(As he turns and starts to jog toward the fight)
I am. Now go. We don’t know what
this guy can do…
CUT TO
HAWKEYE AND WIDOW RUNNING TOWARD THE DANGER.
WIDOW
They’re at the vault.
HAWKEYE
You take high, I got low. And where
is he? We could use him.
CUT TO
VAULT.
IRON MAN
(Suddenly flying at the Panther)
Let’s see what you came all this way
for…
ANGLE
ON PANTHER as he jumps in air and turns and lands on Iron Man’s back to ride
crouched.
ANGLE
ON TALONS as they dig into the armor. CLOSE ON PANTHER FACE.
PANTHER
(Quickly)
Hover Jet to maintain 10 feet
distance from objects until 100 feet from ground.
The
two fly through the wall. ANGLE ON INCREDIBLY FAST PANTHER HANDS AND TALONS
TEARING OPEN ARMOUR FROM BACK.
IRON MAN
Jarvis. The mark six…
CUT TO
THE ARMOR ROOM WHERE THE ARMOR POWERS UP AND STARTS TO FLY UP AND OUT. CUT TO
SKY. PANTHER EXTENDS HAND SHOOTS CABLE
PANTHER
(Pressing Iron Man on neck)
Sleep now.
PANTHER
PULLS HIM OUT OF THE ARMOR AS THEY FREE FALL. CLOSE ON TALONS as Panther
extends arm and they shoot up to opening pulling him up. ANGLE ON ARMOR which
stops with a clang mid air as it hits
Panther’s cloaked ship. PANTHER RETURNS to the floor with Tony Stark over his
shoulder. He is face to face now with Captain America.
PANTHER
(Putting Stark to the side)
Ah…Now we are how you say…somewhere?
SEE
BLACK PANTHER SUIT PERSPECTIVE. UPPER RIGHT CORNER: HUMAN. LOWER LEFT: NO
ENHANCEMENTS.
CAPTAIN AMERICA
(As the suit flies to stop next to him)
We are but I’m not sure its where
you want to be.
PANTHER
Ah you are just a man but for…
CAPTAIN AMERICA
(Throwing the shield)
This?!
PANTHER
(Snatching it out of the air and looking it over)
Yes. This.
(Tossing it out opening lightly)
We will not need this for your test.
CUT TO
Shield clanking on the ship. Widow sees it as she is opening window. Swings out
grabs it on her way up. CUT TO
VAULT.
CAPTAIN AMERICA
You can’t be a common thief….and
your suit is like Iron Man’s…
ANGLE
ON OPENING. Widow lands silently behind the Panther and runs OUT OF FRAME. CUT
TO REAR OF CAP.
PANTHER
(Looking sideways slightly sensing her presence)
No common thief I assure you.
I’m no…cat burglar. And the suit is not like Iron Man. I am a spiritual
warrior king.
CAPTAIN AMERICA
(As they start to face off and size each other up)
Your name…before we dance. I like
knowing the guys I’m dancing with.
PANTHER
No need to stall any longer. I
am here to see The Thunderer as well. Bast did not create me in fear. Sekemet
did not show my ancestors how to run. We are Panthers. Hunters, defenders.
Killers of enemies.
(With C.A.’s disbelief)
No surprise eh, Captain? The
Panther can hear the prey in high grass upon the plain on a windy day.
A
martial art fight ensues with little discussion.
WIDOW
(Aiming stinger from wrist, can’t get a clear shot)
Damn.
Widow
jumps into fight suddenly while Panther is vulnerable and he uses her intrusion
to gain the upper hand tossing her into Captain America effortlessly. Widow
lands, turns and aims. Panther jumps cat like quick and avoids.
PANTHER
You may try now. But it is futile.
Suddenly
elevator opens. ANGLE ON HAWKEYE. an arrow flies at the Panther who snatches it
out of the air directly in front of his face.
HAWKEYE
Ok. That’s new.
PANTHER
(Tossing arrow )
Not to me. I have been snatching
arrows since childhood. Join us bowman.
Suddenly
the Bifrost appears. Thor exists and throws his hammer. PANTHER evades and
grabs hammer as it goes by him. He drops off the hammer as it returns dropping,
seemingly floating down to his ship. He disappears in to its out line. LOW HUM.
CUT TO: AVENGERS. All of them are relaxed suddenly like it was no big deal.
HAWKEYE
(As Thor catches his hammer and looking between Tony and
the floating Mark IV.)
Is it just gonna float all night or do we pour
him in it?
CAPTAIN AMERICA
(To Widow)
The green option?
WIDOW
Sleep in his sound proof room.
Didn’t have time, no orders…So I made a choice.
CAPTAIN AMERICA
No alarms in there? we might wanna
work on that.
HAWKEYE
I don’t even wanna know what wakin’
him outta a sound sleep is like.
CAPTAIN AMERICA
We may have no choice one day.
CUT
TO: Banner’s room. Next to a sound sleep Banner, an active energy hole starts
to appear and then disappears. CUT TO: Panther’s jet.
PANTHER
(To view screen and looking over at the suit)
I have the sample of the Thunderer’s
hammer.
Wakandan Warrior
Will you return soon?
PANTHER
Not just yet. I have some business.
Have the elders returned from consultation with a name
yet?
WAKANDAN WARRIOR
They have returned from consulting
with Bastet.
PANTHER
(Impatiently)
And….I don’t have time for ceremony.
No comments:
Post a Comment